Tuesday, June 13, 2017

Journal #5

Hello!
Sorry for the delay. It has been a quite busy week.
Read the sample paragraphs in the document attached here.
Revise your paragraph about A special gift.
Rewrite it, if needed.
Type your paragraph on the comment section below.

You have until next Monday to do that.

Regards,
Prof. Eva

14 comments:

  1. The Flowers bouquets
    I love the Fkowers bouquets, my family know it and my boyfriend too. For my birthday or another special ocation needlees that someone gift me a Flowers bouquets. The flower for me mean many beautiful thing such as: tenderness, delicacy, motivation,passion and indentiy. Is for that reason which won't change this detail for nothing.

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  2. The Flowers bouquets
    I love the Fkowers bouquets, my family know it and my boyfriend too. For my birthday or another special ocation needlees that someone gift me a Flowers bouquets. The flower for me mean many beautiful thing such as: tenderness, delicacy, motivation,passion and indentiy. Is for that reason which won't change this detail for nothing.

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  3. The Most Matchless Details.
    For me this gifts which that my couple she has received from me have made me cheerful I did not expect her reaction. The cupcakes were a great impact on her since she loves the design and how delicious they were.
    The sweater of her favorite team she liked it so much that he put it on immediately.
    I liked to express my love to the person I love and to express it with these small details.

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  4. Make-up gift
    Make-up is the perfect gift for me. I love make-up because It makes me feel more beautiful but I use it just for special occasions. Also I can combine my make-up with the clothes that I am wearing. In adittion I can bring it with me because it is tiny. Concluding I love my make-up gift because it make me feel more beautiful and sure of myself and there are a lot of it.

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  5. Make-up gift
    Make-up is the perfect gift for me. I love make-up because It makes me feel more beautiful but I use it just for special occasions. Also I can combine my make-up with the clothes that I am wearing. In adittion I can bring it with me because it is tiny. Concluding I love my make-up gift because it make me feel more beautiful and sure of myself and there are a lot of it.

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  6. Clear glass keepsake
    A clear glass keepsake was an really unusual birthday's gift. I received it in my birthday last year. It was the first time someone give me something like that. The clear glass keepsake has a love message and a beautiful design. I love that gift because I know it was different and thoughful.

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  7. The sweater of my birthday
    When cumpli 15 years of age, one my aunts I give myself a sweater that I am charmed with me, his texture, his green color with black, in fact still I preserve it. It is a type of gift that is not costly.But valuable for who we learn to value the things that give us.

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  8. Most Beautiful Virgen Necklace
    My Virgen necklace is the most beautiful gold thing I ever had. It is small and beautiful. It has little diamonds and tiny pearls wich I love the most. I have never seen a beautiful necklace like this one ever. It is special for me because my boyfriend gave it to my in my eighteen birthday and he also told me the most beautiful words in that moment. For that little reasons but the most meanningful ones, my Virgen Necklace is the most beautiful and special one in the wholw world.

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  9. My agenda
    The gift I needed most, a beautiful orange agenda, with a good size and a nice cover, I think that was a beautiful detail by my dad and also for to be that a more organized person with my homeworks, that is my purpose :)

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  10. A Good Wedding Gift The we received

    When we got Married , We recieved A special gift ,we knew a little bit about cooking,but We did not have many certain kitchen items so we are glad since that one of my friend gave us certain kitchen items , and couple sets of drinking glasses. he Chose this gift maybe. he knew that we were going to need , We liked

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  11. My Guadalupe virgin necklace
    the beautiful gift for me, these was the fantastic detail by my boyfriend. Is one of the detail that I have of memory. This necklace is very speciall for me and always I will look after. It's unforgettable gift received. I love this detail for me is a great and wonderful gift.

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  12. my luck bracelet
    One month ago, my mother gave me a special bracelet, it was the best congratulation gift I hve ever recieved. Is black , my second favorite color. it matches with my personal style. It is unbeatable with my others braceletes. It reminds that when I make my goals I have rewards. I cherish the time she spent to choose and their special gift, because of my good grades.

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    Replies
    1. Teacher sorry for the delay, but I do not know why motive was not published the day of the assignment and checking everything note that this journal was not done.

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